My Stanza......Need comments.............Suggestion.

Only 1 Minute.
I am sharing My stanza with you all.
My friends Said me that i will share and take a suggestions of the Reader.
I am not a Poet,Just used to write.
Stanza is as Following.
Na hum jhalak sake or na jhalkne diya humein saqi.
Aaj phir humein woh din yad ate rahe.....
(Dr furqan ali khan)
Thanks to every One for liking and Hope for the Suggestion and Comments.
May Allah bless u all and make you happy.
Pakistan Zindabad.
Regard.
Furqan Ali Khan.
03.10.2012